[Meme] Talking about writing
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I am making yet another attempt to avoid my NaNo, which is currently trying to turn into a history lecture -- a trick all my stories seem to pull on me at some point. Hopefully this will be one of the times I fend off the lecture and unearth the plot without drowning in world-building trivia. (I totally blame my dad for that writing quirk, btw. Having a historian as a parent did wonders for my general writing and thinking skills, but it also ruined my ability to explain anything without spending an hour making sure the person being explained to understands all the relevant background before I get to the -- probably very simple and straightforward -- explanation itself.)
Anyway, a meme, snagged from various people:
I think it would be fun to talk about stories, but the usual memes are like, "What happens next?" "Tell me about Character A?" Which isn't so much talking about stories as it is writing more of a story. But you know how sometimes you read something and you're like, "I got ___ out of this story, I wonder if I have that right?" or "What on earth was ____ supposed to be?" and it's too awkward to ask the author? Now you could totally ask!
I've heard people say that writing is hard because you have to make decisions, but we never really talk about the decisions we make with stories or why we make them. We talk about plot bunnies, but not about how we actually turn them into a story.
And it seems like a lot more fun to do that than to do work.
So, if you wanted, ask me questions! (Or use this to ask your flist to ask you questions).
What were you trying to do [here]? Why did you decide to ____? This is what I thought about xyz, is that what you were going for? What made you write ____? Why did you decide to do this? And so on.
Anyway, a meme, snagged from various people:
I think it would be fun to talk about stories, but the usual memes are like, "What happens next?" "Tell me about Character A?" Which isn't so much talking about stories as it is writing more of a story. But you know how sometimes you read something and you're like, "I got ___ out of this story, I wonder if I have that right?" or "What on earth was ____ supposed to be?" and it's too awkward to ask the author? Now you could totally ask!
I've heard people say that writing is hard because you have to make decisions, but we never really talk about the decisions we make with stories or why we make them. We talk about plot bunnies, but not about how we actually turn them into a story.
And it seems like a lot more fun to do that than to do work.
So, if you wanted, ask me questions! (Or use this to ask your flist to ask you questions).
What were you trying to do [here]? Why did you decide to ____? This is what I thought about xyz, is that what you were going for? What made you write ____? Why did you decide to do this? And so on.
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Date: 2010-11-18 04:09 am (UTC)And, on a completely different track, I'm gonna be greedy and ask one more question:
Why did you decide to write Compatible, or rather where did the idea come from? I felt like it was story to explain some of the background of Aburame, but is that was what you were going for when you wrote it?
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Date: 2010-11-18 04:49 am (UTC)Calormen, on the other hand, is huge and stratified, and has a lot more obvious "culture," in the sense that they have objects of art for art's sake rather than objects of utility that happen to be also made with appearance in mind. Calormen is also clearly a take-off on the Arabian Nights, so the fragments I recall from reading bowdlerized versions of that book as a child obviously crept in -- I think that's where the sensuality comes from.
Calormen also clearly has a bureaucracy, and they have enough economic influence to extend the slave trade out to the islands (at least during the Telmarine era of Narnia), so while they have lords and estates -- the trappings of feudalism -- I don't think they really have a feudal society. The center, meaning the Tisroc, is firmly in control of the periphery... except, of course, when the periphery rebels. And if the Tisrocs weaken, the feudal trappings may take on more weight until the empire becomes an empire in name only, as empires often do. I find India under the Great Mughals to be a useful source of inspiration, though I suspect Lewis was going more for the Ottoman Empire. But really, both are "exotic" Muslim nations that would have been familiar to an Englishman in the mid-1900s, so I consider them both viable real-world parallels.
I tend to go into a story with some clear world-building in mind, and a lot more present in vague, not-yet-concrete form in the back of my head; it crystallizes as I write. Which is not very clear, is it? I think what I mean is that I have a sense of what will fit into a certain culture and what won't, but I don't know the details until I try them out and say, "Yes to this, no to that," and so on. I know what works when I see it, in other words.
In real-world terms, I think I draw Archenland somewhat from pre-Norman England, for the idea of a conditional monarchy and the sense of a small kingdom always on its guard, and also from the ideals of Arthurian chivalry, because they fit the tone. The Calormene assumption that their culture and country are of course the center of the world is, honestly, drawn from my own experience as an American. It is the attitude of a rich and powerful society very secure in itself. Also, Lewis's attitude toward Calormene poetry annoys me, and I want to go read a bunch of Sufi poetry to get a good feel for aphorisms, so I can write something in that general style that sounds good instead of being written specifically to be mocked.
The courting dance itself I just made up. :-) I am sure there are probably real-world equivalents, but I am not aware of any offhand.
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Date: 2010-11-19 03:17 am (UTC)your idea of a courting dance is wonderful.
Um, not that I haven't greedily been asking question after question, but now I wonder. Who is your favorite character to write (Narnian Fandom or in any fandom) and why, if you know why? Who is the hardest?
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Date: 2010-11-19 05:24 am (UTC)I think my current favorite is Jadis, because she is very easy to write, her stories give me an excuse to do lots of world-building, and her POV lets me argue with Lewis's theology in a character-appropriate way. Also, strong women for the win! (I would prefer strong heroines, but I will take strong villains in a pinch. *grin*)
I don't know that any character is hardest to write. Some have tricky headspaces to get into -- Luna Lovegood, for example; if you're not careful, she comes off either too sane or like a cheap imitation of Drusilla from BtVS -- and some have personalities rather alien to mine -- Ron Weasley and Naruto, for example -- but they're all still people. It would probably be more relevant to ask about what kinds of thought processes I find hard to write, and the answer would be anything to do with romance and sex. *wry* When I'm working on "Secrets," for example, I have the damndest time remembering that Ginny has a massive crush on Harry. If I'm not specifically reminding myself, that just falls right out of the narrative, over and over. Sakura's crush on and then love for Sasuke falls prey to the same blind spot.
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Date: 2010-11-21 03:08 pm (UTC)It would probably be more relevant to ask about what kinds of thought processes I find hard to write
It makes a lot of sense to say this really.
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Date: 2010-11-18 04:51 am (UTC)I wrote "Compatibility" in response to a prompt from, IIRC,
It was going to be a horror story, actually -- you can see the remnants of that in the story Shino tells, which was more graphic in the rough draft -- but Team 8 somehow turned the modern-day sections into fluff, which still baffles me. :-)
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Date: 2010-11-19 03:20 am (UTC)