I'm so glad you've been posting this here instead of a separate journal. I'm very much enjoying each new update to it.
Salur does not strike me as a plot device at all; she was very much real to me though I think that has to do with the fact that I get caught up in the story and not really trying to analyze it. And the metaphysics I think is fine (but I'm no expert on that) and to me, it seems written in a way that's not too technical so us normal folks can understand at least the general concepts of it.
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Date: 2010-11-04 01:12 pm (UTC)Salur does not strike me as a plot device at all; she was very much real to me though I think that has to do with the fact that I get caught up in the story and not really trying to analyze it. And the metaphysics I think is fine (but I'm no expert on that) and to me, it seems written in a way that's not too technical so us normal folks can understand at least the general concepts of it.